CHAPTER 1. THE ROCKET.
added some color. When I was finished, I pushed the rocket across the long wavy grass.
Mark jumped in and then….. BLAST OFF! He was drifting through the air feeling very excited.
CHAPTER 2. THE SPACE CRASH.
my rocket was going to crash into the moon! BOOM! I was on the moon my rocket did crash
but in an unexpected way, WE CRASH LANDED! Yep crash landed. We landed up right though.
I got out of the rocket, sat on the moon and waited for help. HELP! HELP! I NEED HELP! Nobody
heard me.
CHAPTER 3. HELP COMES TO ME.
zig zagging around the universe. Suddenly alien spaceship landed on the rocky and dusty moon.
‘’Babble Babble Babble.’’ The alien said, “ I need help.” ‘’Oh sorry I thought you were an alien too.’’
‘’Umm, no, but I wish I was so I would be able to know my way around outer space.’’
CHAPTER 4. THE BROKEN CATASTROPHE.
my flying saucer broke down so how are we going to go down to earth and fix both of our problems?’
’Said Jake.
going to get up again?’’ ‘’I have a plan, I can bring a ladder up and the tools and oil to fix the flying
saucer and rocket.’’ ‘’Great we can do this together because we make a great team!’’ ‘’ No, I don’t know
my way around earth.’’ ‘’ Ok, suit yourself.’’
CHAPTER 5. THE GREAT IDEA.
and Jake need to fix this problem.WHOOSH! ‘’WEEE! WAHOO!’’ ‘’Ow, that hurt. I’m going to
go to the garage now.’’ Three minutes Mark came back with a ladder, and a backpack with an
oil can and some tools in it. He set up the ladder against the fence and kept pushing to make it
longer. Mark started climbing the ladder, up, up, up, up went Mark. Mark kept on climbing until he
came across Jake.’’ Heah Jake, I got the stuff.’’ ‘’Oh cool, now shall we fix the spaceship and the
rocket so we can start going home?’’ ‘’Yeah, we should probably start on it before lunch. If we do
“Yes and if it does I will have to take the blame.’’ “But why that is not very fair?’’ ‘’ Because my
parents wont believe me.’’ ‘’ Ok lets forget about this and get the rocket fixed.’’ ‘’Yeah!’’
CHAPTER 6. THE FIX UP.
SCREECH! ‘’Ok rockets are finished now let's go home!! Bye Jake.’’ ‘’Bye Mark!’’
Hi Sophie & Quinn. I really enjoyed your story. I really liked all the ideas you had and the descriptive words. I look forward to your next story.
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