Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
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Wednesday, April 22, 2020
Outside Poem
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Well done on posting this on your blog - great job! I am also impressed that you have written this poem and included very nice pictures. You have included rhyming and this can be tricky.
ReplyDeleteWow, keep sharing.
Hi Sophie,
ReplyDeleteHow clever of you to compose such a lovely poem. Well done on the rhyming too! Did you sit outside while you wrote this? Haven't we had such nice weather lately so that we actually can get outside and play or go for a walk or climb a tree (very carefully) of course!
Hi Sophie
ReplyDeleteWonderful job in both writing this lovely poem and sharing it. I like how you mentioned that birds put on a show. When my girls and I went for a walk yesterday afternoon, we stopped and listened to this lovely bell bird who was singing away and most definitely putting on a show for us - and we loved it!
What inspired you to write this?
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ReplyDeleteAwesome poem Sophie. Well done. Dad.
ReplyDeleteWhat a beautiful poem Sophie. It really shows how much you love nature. Well done.
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