Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
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Thursday, May 7, 2020
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Hi Sophie,
ReplyDeletethanks for sharing your research and information about whales. I love the cool pictures you have used to help in your presentation. One thing though.... I did have a little trouble reading some of it because the colour of the sea in the images and the colour of your text was quite similar.
I didn't know about the breed of whale called the Narwhal and how it has a horn on its forehead like a unicorn and if they are real. It would be interesting to investigate this more perhaps!
Hi Sophie,
ReplyDeleteYou have done a great job learning about whales and putting your presentation together. You have taught me a few things. I didn't know about the Baleen whales. Whales are such beautiful animals, I'd love to know more!
I did find it hard to read the words because of the colour. Perhaps next time you could choose something with a bigger contrast, like white perhaps?
Keep up the great work!
hi sophie I love your blog post so much it has so much facts about wales. I think that you have done a very good job well done sophie!
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